Refine

Addressing the Criticism:

Criticism: Clashing of forms

Refinement: Creating one continuous form. This also decreases many figures, including embodied energy and water, heat gain, improves ventilation.

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Criticism: Using Heavy Cantilevered frame

Refinement: Use of Natural Reusable Bamboo ribbing

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Criticism: Toilet design and privacy

Refinement: Enclosing them more, rotating them towards the inside of the house.

Doors have been added having them enclosed on 3 sides.
Incorporating a screen door for privacy.

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Criticism: Use of mechanical Louvers with high embodied energy.

Refinement: Removing Louvered walls completly.

Using a taught curtain to separate rooms, and keeping most of the other rooms open underneath the tent.

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Criticism: Drawing Graphics need to read better

Refinement: Using better lineweights, hatching, colour. We also used many sectional drawings, showing materials, construction details and sun diagrams.

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Criticism: The connection between the living area and the bedroom wings.

Refinement: Creating it into one space, which also benefits water catchment

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Criticism: Ribbing will not benefit the ventilation to the building

Refinement: Through fluid mapping we found this to be true, we removed the ribbing and used a tent structure which did not disrupt the ventilation through the house.

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